Konnichuwa Bloggers,
Today for literacy we had to do creative writing.
What I enjoyed:
I enjoyed making up this story and the characters.
What I found difficult:
Something I found difficult is making up the storyline because we only had an amount of time.
Here is my Creative writing:
“What, no you can’t leave” Jill said to Jack. “ Who knows what’s out there “, “ You’ll be fine “ Jack then said to Jill. Jack was going out by himself to get some water, Jill was very angry with him because she didn’t want him to leave her. While Jack was gone she was getting quite bored and he was taking very long to come back. So she decided to go out and find him, the moment she left a few minutes later Jack returned, “ Oh, Jill I’m back with some water. Jill! Jill! “ Jack was now talking to himself, Jack was repeating Jill’s name over and over again until he realized that she was gone. Jack was wondering where she could go to get some more water, or going outside to play and he even thought if someone had kidnapped her, well regardless of whatever he thought he was going to go out and find immediately.
Soon it was dark and Jill went home to check if Jack was there, but he was out. They both were constantly going home and then going somewhere else until Jack heard a girl singing. He thought it was Jill so he ran in the direction shouting out “ JILL! JILL! JIIL? “ He was shouting out her name very happily until he actually came upon the destination and it was a girl outside a cot. He then asked her if she had seen a girl with blonde hair,blue eyes and looks Maori, but she just sang louder. The girl then stopped for a moment and looked at Jack she then said “ Hello there mate what ya doin out here its very dark, oh sorry did I forget to introduce myself well my name is Sarah and I saw a little girl from your description that was shouting out Jack and then she disappeared” Jack was in shock he then asked the lovely little girl “ Are you british and if you are might I ask what are you doing out here in the forest ? “. Sarah then said “ Yeah, I am mate and I actually am looking for a very powerful light that’s the only reason why I am here and because I wanted a camping experience but then I came upon this cot which is really nice” Jack then replied “ Well if your doing nothing can you at least help me find my sister?” “ No I have things to do and I need a bottle of water so no” Jack replied “ Please I have tons of water, pretty please please from the bottom of my heart with a cherry on top” “ Fine then, only because I want a bottle of water “. Off they were on an enormous most gigantic owl and rode on it, so it would be faster to look for Jill.
Jill on the other had found the light that Sarah had been looking for she then found a trail of wet soil leading to somewhere she didn’t quite know where it lead to so she kept following hoping just hoping that it would lead to Jack but it didn’t it came upon a rabbit and it turns out that the wet soil was the rabbits pee. The light then shone really really really bright that Sarah and Jack could see it so Sarah guided the owl down to the light. “ Oh my gosh I was worried sick about you “ Jill said to Jack, “ YOU WORRIED SICK I WAS THE ONE THAT CAME BACK JUST TO FIND THAT YOU WERE MISSING SO DON’T TELL ME YOUR THE ONE THAT WAS WORRIED SICK UGH” Jack said “ WELL AREN’T YOU GLAD THAT I’M SAFE! “ Jill said “ You’re right I am sorry I am just so exhausted and I was thinking straight.” Jack said “ Me too “ said Jill. “ Oh my goodness gracious you found mate you found the light thank you thank you so much” Sarah then said, “ Umm Your welcome I guess” After that Jack and Jill always went together to go and get some water and Sarah went back to the UK.
The End